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Improve the language use in this text While there is a desire to covet endangered animals, transform them into domestic beasts, and all that jazz, it must be more central to our aims to preserve these wild beings.​

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Explanation:

While there is a desire to covet endangered animals, transform them into domestic beasts,and all that jazz, it must be more central to our aims to preserve these wild beings.

Principle 3:

Avoid excessive use of “there” and “it” structures. These sentences can be revised bydropping the “there” and “it” phrase and transforming the sentences appropriately.